Monday, July 8, 2024

What to Avoid in College Application Essays

An important part of the Common Application, which is accepted by more than 1,000 colleges, is the “personal essay.” Students are given six options as prompts, as well as a seventh option which is to share an essay on a topic of choice.  So, students can write about anything at all.

The essay is an integral part of the application, as it is typically viewed by all the schools to which a student applies.  It is the one section where students have the opportunity to share what is unique about them and what qualities they will bring to their future college community.

 

To make their essay stand out, students should avoid some common pitfalls.

Do not cheat. That means students should not turn to ChatGPT or to another person  to write their essay.  This should go without saying but, sadly, it does need to be said.  College admissions officers know what the “voice” of a teenager sounds like, and that’s exactly what they’re looking for.

 

Do not write about mental health issues. Although many young people, as well as those in every age group, deal with such issues, it is important not to share that information.  Due to privacy laws, colleges are not able to contact parents if students struggle with depression, substance abuse, or any other troubling behavior.  Therefore, students should not raise a red flag or they will most likely find their applications in the “rejected” pile.

 

Do not be redundant.  One’s personal essay is not the place to itemize the extracurricular, volunteer, and work experiences that are all included in the Activities section of the Common App. If there is one activity that dominated a student’s high school experience and is particularly compelling, it can be the topic of the essay. But students must elaborate on how they were profoundly impacted by their engagement. 

 

Do not recycle successful essays that were submitted by prior applicants.  Often, students turn to the multitude of articles showcasing essays written by students who were admitted to Ivy League and other elite institutions.  What worked for a prior student will not be effective for another as it’s not their story.  It’s vital for students to share their genuine story using their authentic voice.   


The key to writing a thoughtful, introspective essay is to start early, carefully consider the story you want to share, and then do so in your very own style.


Susan Alaimo is the founder & director of Collegebound Review, offering PSAT/SAT® preparation & private college advising by Ivy League educated instructors. Visit CollegeboundReview.com or call 908-369-5362

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